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Old 2003-02-28, 18:58
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Originally posted by Atresica
The problem is indeed that you are switching too often from subject and give too little detail in it

It more sounds like a synopsis of a story, and that's a pitty

I used to do that when I was younger, though...I was always impatient to write the next bit that was in my imagination, and couldn't be bothered to finish the section that I was currently on properly.
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