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Old 2009-12-06, 18:37
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The Bazaar looks kind of messy, I think you should make it simpler. It looks like you were trying too hard to make it interesting and it went too far.

The others are better, although the spaceship is strange, why would they make a bigger private shuttle like that? Maybe you could make it more like a commercial flight might be, with rows of chairs like you find on an aeroplane?
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