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Old 2006-05-02, 13:16
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Authur takes control of his destiny...A twinsen Fan comic...(rough)

I felt like doing a comic for you guys.

Its just a rough start but i really like these two pages so i doubt i will change them.

Basic plot:
Authur is a young teenager. Up untill now the planet of twinsun has been peaceful but little does our hero know that a new enemy has been working their but off ever since the downfall of Funfrock on planet Zeelich.
Funfrock had a daughter genetically created incase something like this would happen and secretly she has been rebuilding a new line of powerfull rogue clones.
A rogue Groboclone was sent to destroy twinsen but instead targeted the next best thing: Zoe, and attacks/kills her. This sends Twinsen into a ramage and he destroys the grobo clone.
Twinsen, Authur and all of Citadel island mourn their loss.

Twinsen's doesnt want any more chaos to occur. He's had enough.. he packs up his tunic and sendells medallion for good, vowing never to use it again.

Authur misses his mother, he sneaks into the vault where twinsen is keeping his equipment and use's sendells ball hoping to find a way to revive his mother. Sendell only mentions a name of a place (the underground clone cnter). These words are Authurs only hope, so he steals his father's medallion... the medallion reacts with authur and gives him his own tunic and some incredible powers..and he sets off to find the place Sendell told him and defeat funfrocks 'daughter'

lol Sorry, I think i've written enough... thats basically it but tell me if anything needs improving. I just hope you like what i have so far
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Old 2006-05-02, 13:31
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you can't kill Zoe... you simply can't.. it's not allowed
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Old 2006-05-02, 13:34
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you can't kill Zoe... you simply can't.. it's not allowed
Dont worry lol there will be a twist if i end up finishing this comic.
Zoe isnt dead any hoo, her angel is watches over authur.
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Old 2006-05-05, 01:49
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Wow. This is so violent.

Just as any good comic should be!
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Old 2006-05-05, 01:55
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Old 2006-06-29, 14:56
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So,hows the comic going?
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Old 2006-06-29, 16:07
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Lol, very dragon ballish
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Old 2006-07-01, 08:48
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here is the next pages
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Old 2006-07-01, 08:56
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wow, nice work, you have a great style!
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Old 2006-07-01, 09:42
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pg 4
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Old 2006-07-01, 11:33
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lololol nice
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Old 2006-07-01, 13:23
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I needed to teach myself how to vector, and since your composition was so good it inspired me

hope you dont mind
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Old 2006-07-01, 14:45
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Wow! fantastic!! No, i dont mind at all.
Did you use the line tool in photoshop? Thats how i do most of my cging, but yours turned out really well!
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Old 2006-07-01, 14:48
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yeah, just the line tool in photoshop took me a few minutes to figure out how to use it properly, but it was very easy once I had that sorted.

I had a go at colouring it lol, Im not gonna post it coz it was terrible
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Old 2006-07-01, 14:58
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yeah, just the line tool in photoshop took me a few minutes to figure out how to use it properly, but it was very easy once I had that sorted.

I had a go at colouring it lol, Im not gonna post it coz it was terrible
I'll have a go at colouring if you want.
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Old 2006-07-01, 15:02
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Old 2006-07-03, 09:23
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NICE. I love vectoring. Great work!!!!
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Old 2006-08-03, 22:43
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Maliciousalice--I think you have nice drawing skills! I have to admit I find it a little tough to imagine Twinsen totally surrendering after an event like that (he seems more like the butt-kicking type to me). Still, I will be watching for more of these...I can't wait to see how Arthur looks when he gets hold of the medallion!

BTW, I have an account at SheezyArt...I recognize your avatar from there.
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The stuggle to breathe

"Hang on.."
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Old 2007-01-10, 15:50
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Old 2007-01-10, 16:45
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Very shocking..ly cool.. drawing
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Old 2007-01-10, 16:51
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What did zoe do you? :P
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Old 2007-01-10, 17:48
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Anyway, he shouldn't be crying like that when she's still not dead. He should be comforting her and talking to her, he acts selfish, a close person is dying and is probably scared as hell and he's crying.

Anyway, damn you draw cool!
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Old 2007-01-10, 17:50
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Lol i have no idea what you guys are going on about.
Don't worry, I have decided that zoe isnt going to die, instead she will be in a temporary frozen state (practically dead), her soul gets stolen by this mysterious woman while the sendels try to save her.

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