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Old 2006-04-28, 00:06
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For those who care: Part 2 of Twinsen - the ever after

I posted the 2nd part i nthe first post but then figured that some might not think to look there. So here it is, all of it. New stuff is below old

In last fanfic:
It was a day like any other. The pixelated flowers were in bloom, and the looping ''citadel island'' theme music was blasting in everyones ears. Down by the harbour sat Twinsen - a hero to his planet, never to be forgotten. Or was he? When was the last time anyone had needed his help? And why was he always so set on saving people? He Sunk down on the bench and watched the newcoming travellers by the ferry. If only he too had a destination. He didn't even have a job. Searching the bins had always provided him with the money needed. But what about the child to be?
He was plagued daily by all these questions, and he never got anywhere with his thoughts. He'd always hoped to settle down with Zoe like a nice family, but Zoe had really gotten on his nerves lately. Actually, she'd been nothing but a pain ever since he met her, but back then he'd poor down magic potions like rootbeer. Seemed to have a disrupting effect on his judgement, things got a little fuzzy and suddenly he was in a committed relationship.


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The ferry took off with the 2-3 people that could fit in it at a time. Maybe he too should go to Desert Island, or perhaps the dome of the slate. Just jump into the darkness and disappear forever. Nah, too depressing, wouldn’t help.
He’d give anything for a little trouble. Perhaps another tralü, have it kidnap some defenceless little kid and….no, how could he think such a thing…surely the children on the island were annoying and they all had a big brother who’d have nothing better to do than to wait around to beat you senseless if you as much as touched their little sister or brother (that they’d probably beaten up themselves when they were younger). This was crazy! What had happened to the happy, whipped Twinsunian that he used to be? Twinsen knew that he had to take action somehow. Do something drastic…maybe not to the children, but to someone who’d deserved it. Now that he thought of it… there were a lot of creatures around who didn’t even know who the hell he was! It was an insult to his pretty medalion. He buffed it every day, never with Zoe’s help though, she was always too tired. He was the only one who seemed to be proud of it, and people around him needed to know what it stood for. He stood up instantly, and marched straight to the library. Once again it was time to bring out the tunic and take action!

What is Twinsen going to do to the creatures of Citadel Island? Find out in the next episode oooof: Twinsen – the ever after.
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Old 2006-04-28, 07:09
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It's good!

But if you interpret Twinsen as a phedophile (which I did) then it's halarious.
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Old 2006-04-28, 16:37
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I hope he's gonna turn into some serial killer
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Old 2006-04-28, 23:08
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I hope he's gonna turn into some serial killer
Aaaah mr. fish..you ruined the big finnish!

I didn't mean for him to be a phedofile, just trying to get out that the children are annoying :P anyway, since some people like it I shall continue for the 3rd and final chapter of Twinsen - the ever after. No one other than the 2 of you had commented, I was worried nobody liked it. I'll give the 3rd chapter a go.
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Old 2006-04-28, 23:59
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good story so far

some Citadel Island newspaper headlines
"Murder on Citadel Island!"
"Another murder at Citadel Island"
"Third murder, Is it a trilogy?"
"A victim, who's the murderer?"
"Is Twin..err..The murderer a serial killer?"
"Another Twinsunian murdered, but what's taking so long with those annoying francos??!"
"OMG OMG OMG"
"Citadel Island Newspaper hires a new boss, after a unexcepted accident"
"Murderer Captured! LOL!"
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Old 2006-04-29, 00:25
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good story so far

some Citadel Island newspaper headlines
"Murder on Citadel Island!"
"Another murder at Citadel Island"
"Third murder, Is it a trilogy?"
"A victim, who's the murderer?"
"Is Twin..err..The murderer a serial killer?"
"Another Twinsunian murdered, but what's taking so long with those annoying francos??!"
"OMG OMG OMG"
"Citadel Island Newspaper hires a new boss, after a unexcepted accident"
"Murderer Captured! LOL!"
Oh inventar, will you be my writing partner
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Old 2006-05-02, 22:28
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Oh inventar, will you be my writing partner
are you being sarcastic?
those headlines were supposed to be stupid

anyway, if I would ever write a fan fic, I would do it with a LBA story generator (I'm too lazy to write by myself )
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Old 2006-05-02, 22:31
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LBA story generator (I'm too lazy to write by myself )
Wtf is this?

Quote:
Dinofly went to Rebel Island, where he met Roger de la Fontaine, they
told jokes and laughed loudly and then Dinofly went to Principal Island, where he met
Mrs.Bloop, they talked together for sometime. Then he travelled to
Planet Zirla, there Dinofly met Bob Vortix and they thought of someway to beat the zeelichians.

Twinsen went to Tippet Island, where he met Bob Vortix, they
thought of someway to beat the zeelichians and then Twinsen went to Principal Island, where he met
Tabata, they imagined how twinsun would be when they're dead. Then he travelled to
Desert Island, there Twinsen met Tabata and they went eat to a restourant.

Dr.Funfrock went to Planet Zirla, where he met Zoe, they
gave each other secret packets and then Dr.Funfrock went to Tippet Island, where he met
Arthur, they made fun of dr.funfrock. Then he travelled to
Emerald Moon, there Dr.Funfrock met Joe The Elf and they told jokes and laughed loudly.

Tral? went to Zeelich, where he met Roger de la Fontaine, they
went fishing and then Tral? went to Zeelich Under Gas, where he met
Joe The Elf, they made fun of dr.funfrock. Then he travelled to
Zeelich Under Gas, there Tral? met Joe The Elf and they gave each other secret packets.
Lol
Did you already posted that and I missed it?
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Old 2006-05-02, 22:40
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It just randomizes simply a character, then a place, and then a other character, and then what they both do.
It still lacks of stuff, so it woun't random much different storyes..

I haven't made a thread for it, because it still sucks so much that it doesn't deserve a thread.

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Tral? went to Zeelich, where he met Roger de la Fontaine, they
went fishing and then Tral? went to Zeelich Under Gas, where he met
Joe The Elf, they made fun of dr.funfrock. Then he travelled to
Zeelich Under Gas, there Tral? met Joe The Elf and they gave each other secret packets.
hmm.. that Tralu "ü" doesn't seem to work for you.. I wonder do other people have the same problem..
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Old 2006-05-02, 22:52
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That's because I don't have western characters as my default non-unicode character-set: Click image for larger version

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Old 2006-05-02, 22:58
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Quote:
Ricochet went to Planet Zirla, where he met Zoe, they
gave each other secret packets and then Ricochet went to Tippet Island, where he met
Arthur, they made fun of dr.funfrock. Then he travelled to
Emerald Moon, there Ricochet met Joe The Elf and they told jokes and laughed loudly.
What's your story?
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Old 2006-05-02, 23:01
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I think a split is needed
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Old 2006-05-02, 23:06
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Yeah, it might be a fun thread for everyone to put their name in and see what comes up first.

You're a mod, can't you do it?
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Old 2006-05-02, 23:07
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You're not up to date are you?
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Old 2006-05-02, 23:10
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That's what I thought! But...

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Check it yourself.
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Old 2006-05-02, 23:21
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It's up to the admins which privileges they give to who, but I'm only a moderator of the LBA Modifications forum... I don't need all those other privileges. (well maybe except for the right to edit the DOSBox guide)

Anyhow...
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Old 2006-05-03, 07:13
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Well, Darkflame said he will remove all those other modding abilities, but apparently he forgot...

Why don't you just PM him (or El) and ask him to remove them?
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Wtf is this?



Lol
Did you already posted that and I missed it?
This is better than some fanfics I've read.
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