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Old 2013-05-18, 22:49
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I made sumthin! L@@k!

^ Is that title annoying? Hehe yes? That was the point haha

This isn't finished but it takes me forever to finish anything so I will post what I have so far.

Critique anyone?? (I allow mean comments. They only help me improve. So if it sucks PLEASE let me know!) <3

I'm gonna blow this art thread up just fyi. So expect a lot of pics from me being posted for critiquing purposes.


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Old 2013-05-18, 23:09
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Really impressive!

Only thing I can say(and this might be just in my mind anyway ) is that I think her eyes might be a little squint...
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Old 2013-05-19, 05:08
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Old 2013-05-19, 06:51
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This looks Amazing, except for the butterlies...I didn't realy like the way they were drawn (specially the one on the right, it looks kinda weird.)

But all together awesome work! keep posting more images =)
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Old 2013-05-19, 08:47
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Thanks guys.

The butterflies will look better soon. They're still in the rough sketch phase (so are the leaves and feathers in her hair.)

Oh Dino-Fly, what do you mean by squint?
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Old 2013-05-19, 09:39
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Old 2013-05-19, 10:35
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Thanks guys.

The butterflies will look better soon. They're still in the rough sketch phase (so are the leaves and feathers in her hair.)

Oh Dino-Fly, what do you mean by squint?
When I look at her left eye, and then I look at her right eye, it looks like they're not pointing in the same direction(making an obtuse angle, not an acute angle).

But again, it's probably mostly in my head!
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Oh Dino-Fly, what do you mean by squint?
When I look at her left eye, and then I look at her right eye, it looks like they're not pointing in the same direction(making an obtuse angle, not an acute angle).

But again, it's probably mostly in my head!
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Old 2013-05-19, 20:52
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Y U NO give us a printscreen ?

Anyway, yeah, cute! The lips are particularly awesome. You have this amazing technique, that really gives a feeling of volume to it.
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Old 2013-05-19, 21:42
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Sorry. I'm just kinda lazy. Is this better?

Her skin isn't supposed to be that yellow. Which is part of the reason I didn't do a prnt scrn. Its my PCs stupid screen. The color is messed up. have no idea why but it ruins all my pics.
So if anyone thinks she looks weird.. I already know lol

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Old 2013-05-19, 22:21
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Sorry. I'm just kinda lazy. Is this better?

Her skin isn't supposed to be that yellow. Which is part of the reason I didn't do a prnt scrn. Its my PCs stupid screen. The color is messed up. have no idea why but it ruins all my pics.
So if anyone thinks she looks weird.. I already know lol

I know we are boyfriend and girlfriend, but trust me when I say It looks great and thats not just me trying to be nice? You are a good arist and this picture is rather innocent looking it's rather sweet. The picture is self is well made all lines where they should be giving it a real look, stylized way you have done the eyes with the colors than making it like some sort of animated standard.
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Old 2013-05-19, 22:23
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Old 2013-05-19, 22:26
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My brain hurts! I can't figure out the color issue. Sigh. I just hooked another monitor to the computer and I had the same issue. So I guess its not my monitor after all. Maybe its photoshop? I have both CS5&6 and have the same issue on both. Grrr.

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Old 2013-05-19, 23:09
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My brain hurts! I can't figure out the color issue. Sigh. I just hooked another monitor to the computer and I had the same issue. So I guess its not my monitor after all. Maybe its photoshop? I have both CS5&6 and have the same issue on both. Grrr.

Have you tried to change the color profile settings? Open Color Management (press Windows key + R and type colorcpl then press Enter) and see if you can do something.
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Old 2013-05-19, 23:24
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Have you tried to change the color profile settings? Open Color Management (press Windows key + R and type colorcpl then press Enter) and see if you can do something.
I actually ended up making a thread about this here. But I will try that thanks.

EDIT:I just went to the color management and everything is listed as system default. Should I change those? Or keep them as default? (Not sure what to change them to if need be.)
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Old 2013-05-19, 23:36
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I actually ended up making a thread about this here. But I will try that thanks.

EDIT:I just went to the color management and everything is listed as system default. Should I change those? Or keep them as default? (Not sure what to change them to if need be.)
I'm not sure either I was just trying to help... But I think the color profile settings may not be the problem then.
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Old 2013-05-19, 23:40
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Yeah I'm totally dumbfounded.
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Old 2013-05-20, 01:57
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I think I fixed the issue with Battlers help. Thanks a million!

These are the correct colors

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I think I fixed the issue with Battlers help. Thanks a million!

Looks good, got any other projects on the way?
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Old 2013-05-20, 02:03
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Yes. (I know what your referring to). It just takes me twice as long to do 2 things at once.
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Yes. (I know what your referring to). It just takes me twice as long to do 2 things at once.
actually i wasn't refering to that XD. Your artistic side intreges me. I have a friend a lot like you, who is also very good at art.
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Old 2013-05-20, 02:31
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It's really great! I love the eyes.

The hair looks kind of weird to me, maybe shadows and lightning are missing. You said it was work in progress though
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Old 2013-05-20, 04:31
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The hair looks kind of weird to me, maybe shadows and lightning are missing. You said it was work in progress though
Are you kidding me??? the hair is one of the best parts. Hair & lips, the most touching parts of this piece in my opinion (also my fav parts when I look at women in general (since they don't have long, bunny ears)).
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(since they don't have long, bunny ears)[/size]).
may I interest you in another kind of fur?
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