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Old 2013-02-09, 23:25
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Twinsun 3ds Max Twinsen Model

To top off this new year with the first creation thread for 2013, I have decided to post a not too old model, but not a completely recent model, either. I created this model about a month ago. I hope all of you enjoy it. It only took me about two days to create. It might be used for an upcoming game I plan on creating and releasing eventually. It is called, "Dino - Flight". Which was discussed in a fan game thread about a month or two ago.

To cut to the chase, here is the model of Twinsen. All he needs left is a re - texture, a few edits, and bones so he can be animated.



What do you think?

I may add up - coming pictures in the future. As of now, this is what there is to look at.
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Old 2013-02-10, 00:57
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His ponytail is too big.
Really? I thought it looked like the right size. I am glad you think everything else looks good.
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Old 2013-02-10, 01:32
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Funny ho he somehow has the physionomy of a black person. I like the blue of his robe a lot.
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Old 2013-02-10, 14:38
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Funny ho he somehow has the physionomy of a black person.
you're talking about this, right?




Yes, the ponytail is a bit weird, the rest seems fine to me... but i'm no modeler and I couldn't even get close to model a sphere, so feel free to ignore my comment :P
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Old 2013-02-10, 16:21
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Umm... not at all, I was referring to his face...
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Old 2013-02-10, 19:35
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I'd also make the rope of the medallion smaller, it looks way too big. The medallion in general seems a bit disproportionate.
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Old 2013-02-11, 03:10
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you're talking about this, right?
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Old 2013-02-11, 15:32
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that's only half racist as this


Seriously tho, I think the standars of what is racist should be revised.
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Twinsen hago mi aporte, este es mi modelo en 3D



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Thats really cool work

(no need to post it in three different threads though!)
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Old 2015-06-08, 09:12
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sorry :(

sorry i didn't know where upload it (excuse my bad english)
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No problem

Great work!
Maybe just try to make the fingers a touch smoother though?
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Old 2015-06-11, 05:52
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better?

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This thread is getting older I see.

Wow. Bishop, I am impressed! Your model looks fairly close to the models of Twinsen that we see in the cutscenes of both LBA 1 and 2. Everything looks great!

However, I would like to consider a few criticisms if that is fine:

1.) Twinsen's belt looks kind of, "Flat". You should use a, "Torus" primitive for the belt, and modify if to fit best. I used one in my model in the first post.

2.) Twinsen's belt, medallion string, and his ponytail ring should be an orange color. I used red for mine to bring out an LBA 2 feel.

3.) Twinsen's tunic is a fairly brighter blue. Although, I guess this varies. In LBA 1 cutscenes his tunic looked darker, and in LBA 2, it looked lighter.

4.) Twinsen's ponytail is more brown. Again, this varies between LBA 1 and 2. Everything did seem much more vibrant in LBA 2.

Anyways, good job overall. I give a 4 / 5.
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Old 2015-07-26, 01:04
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Twinsen

Thank you for you critic, i will work in the belt, but my biggest problem is that i'm daltonic jajaja, and i've using a software of color recognition, of this picture


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Old 2015-07-26, 01:08
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can i send you the 3d model by email? then you can change the wrong colors (i'm using the Google Translator, i'm from Argentina jaja)
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