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Old 2006-11-17, 19:31
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Recap of Lost final episode -Lost spoilers- (WARNING: not an LBA fan fic!)

(this seems like the most proper MBN forum to post this, sorry wing dude! feel free to move this thread)

Lost season 18 episode 35, "Our Mutual Friend":

Today it's 4 years since the crash, the first experiment is complete. Abram (first introduced on season 3 as "eye patch guy") has selected the best person on the island to continue to the next experiment.
Only few are left now.

The airplane they have built is finally ready to fly out of here. Sayid and Ben are getting the ground clear and Jack is ready to bring his flying lessons to use. The airplane is facing directly in the compass bearing of 325. "Get us the hell out of here!!", Ben yells to Jack (apparently in season 6 he became Jack's best friend). Claire won't make peace with Aaron being killed by the smoke monster and has to be dragged by Sayid and Alex to the plane. "I'm sorry, Claire. But you don't deserve to die here." says the now scarred Alex with tears in her eyes.
Nikki, Desmond and Pen are sitting in the back of the plane.
"We're out of here, hold on!" - yells Jack with very mixed feelings.

Sayid uses the binoculars and spots the smoke monster straggling out of it electromagnetic cage. "WE HAVE TO GO NOW!!"

But then, Nikki spots Hurley running towards the plane - "Wait!! We have to wait for Hurley!". Sayid replies with "There's no time!" and Jack starts the engine. Hurley is barely breathing but is devoted to use up all of his powers to get to the plane on time. He runs, falls, gets up and runs again, and finally gets there. "Come.. on... Open up dudes..."

But the smoke monster has already gotten free. They can't afford to waste another second. The airplane is starting to take off. Hurley falls to the ground - "Just awesome...".

The plane is leaving. "Hold on!" yells Jack with his anti-wind glasses as they suddenly fall into a deep fog.

Did they manage to get out? They're not sure. They can't speak anymore. They can't feel anymore. All they can feel is the nothingness around them. Then the camera takes off from them and changes scene back to Hurley.
We see Hurley lying on the ground crying as the monster gets to him. One moment he looks inside it, the next moment he suddenly realizes everyone on the island is either gone or dead, everyone except for him. The monster then disappears into the thin air, never to be seen again.

The episode ends as Hurley says the last word we'll ever hear on LOST:
"Dude..."
The camera then goes up fast until we see the island from above. (note: If you pay much attention you can spot Danielle still alive and walking around on another section of the island. An easter egg?)

The End

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Old 2006-11-18, 18:17
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I couldn't tell if this was a spoof or a serious fic.
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Old 2006-11-18, 18:44
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I couldn't tell if this was a spoof or a serious fic.
It is whatever you want it to be

I made some typos though... (fixed)
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Old 2006-11-19, 16:30
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You should try to get one that explains EVERYTHING, in just a few paragraphs
(but then, obviously, mark with spoilers)

And i still say the last scene will actualy be Hurly giving Walt his money.
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Old 2006-11-20, 11:18
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It'll probably be some lame Jack/Kate scene..
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@ fanfic


(sorry for revival)
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Old 2009-02-07, 18:49
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Mwuhaha. It is going to be the final episode, you know. (and there might even be a sequel later about Hurley and Danielle repopulating the island)
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Considering I wrote this mid season 3 (after "I Do")...

Spoiler:
I'd say I was pretty damn close.

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Still, my version is better.
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I was just about to revive this thread too!

And I like how some of those predictions actually came true .
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Old 2010-05-25, 21:52
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And i still say the last scene will actualy be Hurly giving Walt his money.


I mean, I guess it could still happen...
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